"Carnival Night" 06/05/2009
 

If anyone has comments for my story "Carnival Night," you can post them right here.

 


Comments

Rodney from the UK

Wed, 07 Oct 2009 20:35:34

That was excellent...scary...creeeepy. Well done luv.

 

Sun, 28 Feb 2010 17:36:18

Ok, here are the compliments...
Good adjectives
Suspense was drawn with that dude that seemed to follow Charlotte
Messed up in a good way.(the fun house)

I really can't think of a lot that I disliked about it. Maybe have a bit more of the character's thoughts. But all in all 5 to 4 1/2 stars. Bravo!

 

Sun, 29 Aug 2010 19:50:32

Guilt always hurries towards its complement, punishment; only there does its satisfaction lie. (Lawence Durrell, British writer)

 



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