Ok, here are the compliments... Good adjectives Suspense was drawn with that dude that seemed to follow Charlotte Messed up in a good way.(the fun house)
I really can't think of a lot that I disliked about it. Maybe have a bit more of the character's thoughts. But all in all 5 to 4 1/2 stars. Bravo!
Guilt always hurries towards its complement, punishment; only there does its satisfaction lie. (Lawence Durrell, British writer)
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I am seventeen years old (as of May 21, 2010), I adore writing and reading, and I live in Michigan. Also, visit my brother's photography site at: http://www.jonesphotography.weebly.com