If anyone has comments for my story "Carnival Night," you can post them right here.

Rodney from the UK
10/7/2009 01:35:34 pm

That was excellent...scary...creeeepy. Well done luv.

2/28/2010 09:36:18 am

Ok, here are the compliments...
Good adjectives
Suspense was drawn with that dude that seemed to follow Charlotte
Messed up in a good way.(the fun house)

I really can't think of a lot that I disliked about it. Maybe have a bit more of the character's thoughts. But all in all 5 to 4 1/2 stars. Bravo!

8/29/2010 12:50:32 pm

Guilt always hurries towards its complement, punishment; only there does its satisfaction lie. (Lawence Durrell, British writer)


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